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You did better concerning rhythm in this song than in the other song. I noticed a bit of off tuning at like 1:20 when the bass wasn't there to cover. I would say for this one just make sure the tuning is spot on. OTher than that, can't wait to hear what you do with this one. Sounds really good. Again, great chord progressions.

This is a great pop rock background. Progressions are great, mix is pretty standard. A little too much bass pick in the verse parts. That's the main thing. You gotta make sure that those bass parts and rhythm guitar parts are super tight in the verse parts. Use a metronome in your earphones if you have to.

Up the creek! Without a paddle! -- Oh, did I mention...the jetpacks? LMAO!! Idaho and get a job in plumbin!...I'm so a fan of this song...not to mention that your voice on the hook was really, REALLY catchy. DOWNLOADED ALL DAY.

SonicWombat responds:

Thanks man, I'm glad you liked it.
STAY CRUNK, AN' SHIZZLE

I like it - wish it was longer. What I really dug was the discordant chords. I would've loved to get like a B part around like 1:20 or something, like a little bridge. IS this meant to be a rap instrumental or just like a standalone?

BOULLIE responds:

Full moon was out and there was a light snow falling.
There were no clouds either, so the moon light practically danced on
the tree tops.

The street lights hadn't come to life yet either, so the moonlight still had
some time to play.

The sky was especially characteristic on that night.
Stars flickering everywhere, breeze coming through.

This beat is just me appreciating my surroundings for what they can be.

Thanks for listening.

Very different drums, which fit well. I like it when people fit in different sounds. Also, great progression.

AK-49 responds:

Thanks b- BTW, I sent a PM about your Theresa EP. good work there!

Dwn4Ths

Obsideo responds:

ThnkU.

I actually think the machine gun drums were good in and of themselves. The reason they got a bit annoying to me is cuz they were mixed so far in front of the rest of the sounds. It's more a mixing thing than the actual arrangement...I mean, all songs today have machine gun 808s.

Excellent pick for the win. I might have to enter and kick your ass next year.

newhansen responds:

Haha thx dude! Bring it on like donkey kong! ^^

Drew me right in with the FF7 theme (sort of)and kept me going the entire time.

I so in. Canihaz.

theGodspeed responds:

Putting together a free album soon, then you totally canhaz. ;D

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