The dynamics are what brought this song to life for me. The unexpected changes through the progressions were what caught my ear and made me listen to what the rest of the instruments in the song were trying to do. I commend the originality of that process and the artistic integrity it took to keep it there, cuz I know the inner discussions that come when you are considering something that "different." I look forward to hearing more so that I can have a more complete perspective from which to judge your future work.