BOOOOOOOOOOOO...
no delivery...lyrics are alright, but I believe NONE OF IT
BOOOOOOOOOOOO...
no delivery...lyrics are alright, but I believe NONE OF IT
Good tempo, interesting sounds, I think it needs a little more EQing to separate the instruments, and mixing.
Dude, if you took this to a real studio to record this could be an actual like, SONG song. I like this. Well, I'd redo the 2nd verse, but the 1st verse is awesome.
Thanks man! I recorded it in a hurry, so didn't bother to equalize it or anything. I WOULD re-do the second verse 'cause my timing is a little off, but I can't be bothered. :-P
I guess you get props for the freestyle, but dammit, this isn't the best. Don't freestyle off the top if you face me.
I promise I'll bring at least my B game if I go up against ya bud. ;)
You KNEW that you would get 3 stars automatically for the Geto Boys track. Your flo is pretty generic...I'm gonna go out on a limb and predict your whole life based solely on your flo.
You were a white kid that was never accepted by your own. You found hip hop and thought to access other humanity by its power; however, you never quite had the courage to say what your heart desired until now. You just built up the courage.
However, you are accessing other paradigms to help you in your efforts, namely Eminem and Cage. The unaccepted white boys who did it before you. I see through this tactic, although I respect it. You are just trying to find your place.
I hope that we do not fight in the first round, for I am another who has not found his place. I do not want to eliminate you from this competition immediately. There are others who do not deserve to live whom we must excise.
However, make no mistake that when we meet, I must and will destroy you.
Ugh that was lame.
The instrumental is "Ice Cube - Down For Whatever"
Also any criticism with racial connotations is just bullshit. I was going in expecting a lot of dope emcees but based on what you've said you lowered the fuck out of my expectations (for you at least)
Good luck in the competition bro.
Sigh. Your professed disdain for the competition might have worked if 3 traxx hadn't done it before you. You are much more nervous than you let on. I can tell by your selection of track. Weak people choose strong traxx to surround them to hide their weakness. However, 3 stars because you did well within the environment that you set for yourself.
Strong people choose strong tracks because weak tracks aren't enough.
And of course they're going to have disdain for the other tracks, that's pretty much the point of a hype track.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
You have accessed the same energy as Lil Wayne, but you do it well, thus the 3.5 stars. Very believable, but the energy is not yours. If I battled you, I would find my own energy and beat you because you rely on Wayne too much right now.
thanks for the comment beside's the weezy part, im not trying to act like weezy in anyway, its just the way i talk and yell maybe but thanks :D
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