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Gotta master dubstep tracks before you put em up. I agree with M357 about the weakness in the bass, but I know why. It's because dubstep is all about the mastering. This track is unmastered, which is why ppl are giving it the low rankings.

Put the emphasis on that bass, resubmit, and I guarantee you'll get higher rankings.

Obsideo responds:

Word, thanks for the advice. I'll tinker with the bass until it's wub-wub-y enough.

Writing these comments after considering P64's comments on the board. First of all, props to P64 for postin that hard, cuz it shows he loves hip hop, same as me. However....

Wyze for the win. Because he was more personal. Yes, P64, you are in an insult battle. Ain't no fuckin A&Rs listenin. Only thing we're going for here is respect on the mic.

Your verses sounded like, too general. It would have made a good song verse for a Black Moon or Hit Squad record. But Wyze was comin AT YOU.

As for flow, yea, Wyze's flow is ahead of the beat, but that's not a bad thing, cuz he keeps it going. I was noddin my head and the head nod didn't stop when Wyze came on cuz that's just his flo. If it's a constant thing, it works. Cuz it's HIM.

That's my shit. My vote don't even count, just puttin my 2 cents in cuz this was a good battle.

Since I CAN write a review, I wanna address somethin, Hector's relevant comment about how he thought I could be in a Grind battle cuz my flow in the first verse was not syncopated. Absolutely. I didn't syncopate it on purpose. I want to challenge all the MCs to grow past the syncopated 16th note flow that everyone uses because it's easy.

The reason the flow in the first verse works, I think, is cuz it allows room for EMOTION. I deliberately lean back/start late so I can fit all the words in, but I stay with the beat. Like at 1:40 when I say "I'm not..." that was deliberately meant to fit right in over those two snares. You know? And I'm feelin you, glitchs, when you said my flow scared you at first. I took a big risk, but that's what bein an MC is. It works cuz I stuck with it the whole verse. The beat is quantized. The MC should not be.

Know what I'm sayin? I love hip hop. Don't think I'm like, tryna be all Mr. I'm The Shit, but I just wrote what I felt.

If after all that, you still want a syncopated flow, chk my other song "White Girl Love Song." I did like an early Biggie flow on that. A little more syncopation on that.

Oh yeah, even though I can't vote, I vote for me for the win. Props to Future for that "you even shouted out my Soundcloud. Thanks John!" line. That shit was dope.

Couldn't listen because of XST's mic clipping. I felt my speakers begging not to be destroyed. This has actually nothing to do with XST's lyrical content, cuz the mic was clippin so hard I couldn't understand the words

This track gets a 5 for the entertainment value alone OMG first lil C knowing he had to stop and not stopping...then fuckin PAUSING for 2 bars then giving shout outs...then Teqneek's last verse was,,...holy fuck I was on the FLOOR. "IT'S IMPOSSIBLE TO DRIVE YOUR FUCKING CAR INTO A STAR!" lololololol

Dude, I'm an MC, can't vote, but Teq hands down. This shit was fuckin insanely funny.

FUCK!!!! LMAO

Do you know Tucker Booth? He used this beat on an album a long time ago. I used to hang with him for a while.

Crueltool responds:

may be.... but i made it beat myself, dude. that's all.

You had some unmusical glitches in there at 1:18 and 1:26. May have been the bass or something, but it took me out of the groove.

freezwalm responds:

Download the track, and enjoy my music glitch-free :-)
Btw, appreciate the PM

Did nicely. I can see doing drugs to this and spacin out.

Dammit, I love you.

Umm, yeah.

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