Poniiboi's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Doomsday-]

Very cool. Minus half a star because there were no changes in rhythm. I like to jump up and down some as well as flow with dubstep. Some change.

[ClabTrap - Alto - Gunning]

I was so ready to h8 on ur late-breaking ass. But this is good.

However, I'm not wishing you good luck like all the other bozos in this thread. I want the good luck, and I don't want you to have any.

hellbound182 responds:

i will take that as a compliment! thanks man i wish u luck though!

[Delinquent's Soldier of Rage]

This mix isn't on the level of the others. Too many frequencies competing with each other. However, the idea is strong.

[Delinquent's Psycho Bitch]

This is very catchy and just really good. I just found your material. You have a quality level that I am starting to see is very consistent and very good.

[TiGeR - Altocumulus]

This is the only song I've ever seen with more downloads than total plays. That's an accomplishment in itself, LMAO

I was so happy for the first 1:10. The sound that came in under the first synth distracted. It didn't add anything and it wasn't clear. The square lead was too loud, I agree with the previous reviewer, and I didn't like the melody line as much.

I would say that it started off like a ball of flame and then petered out toward the end. If you put as much energy into the accompaniment as in that first drop, it'd be fantastic.

[NGHH11 - NGSample - Delinquent]

It IS rappable. I can do it and you will see a marriage between these types of beats and rap quite soon. On the contrary, a track like this is BEGGING for a rapper.

About this particular beat, this is incredible.

[GQ - Love]

I say if you ever want to get past just people on NG liking your stuff, you gotta get out of your head when you write. I can tell that you are still trying to think of the most mutilsyllabic version of every line you write down, and you're trying to fit every syllable perfectly on the 16th note it belongs on. But when you're writing about love, I believe that less is more. Take time to pause between thoughts and don't focus so much on being "witty."

It's the difference between a battle rap and a song. I view this as a battle rap about love, someone trying to intellectually explain every detail of it instead of trusting the audience to fill in the holes. Trusting fans to like it if it isn't so chock full of chiasmus. Asking questions that can't necessarily be answered.

[nerfgun timmy]

Eh.

[Hype Track 3!]

Ok, your track choice was AWESOME. I got hype when I heard it. I love this beat from the Boondocks. However, you didn't rock it quite right. Sort of right, not quite perfect. I should get on this to show you how to do it. Maybe if we meet in the battle I will. Mwuhuhuhahahahahaha

Obsideo responds:

It's been updated, re-listen, good sir!

[Lexaholics [ClabTrap'12]]

Pretty hype. I like.